Monday, January 21, 2008

the dramatic spanking

lmao, dont ask what I was thinking when I wrote this, just know I am insane :P

The Dramatic Spanking
(fictional soap opera script)

[Scene one]
[open scene: a dark and stormy night, camera zooms in on a mansion on a hill then cuts to a high class office and pans to a 40 yr old good looking well dressed gentleman sitting behind a giant oak desk reading the latest stock quotes in the newspaper with a pipe held in his pearly white teeth]

[Enter: a 16 yr old beautiful woman in a pink cashmere skirt and jacket and long white gloves]

Daughter: Father! I have terrible news! the dog was killed!

Father: [looking concerned] what happened, Daughter?

Daughter: I fear mother had a panic attack and the dog was run over while she was being taken to the emergency room [brings back of hand to forehead] and I fear it is all my fault!

Father: [gets out of his chair and out from behind the desk] how could it be your fault?

Daughter: because I showed her this! [holds up a piece of paper]

[Father walks over to her takes the paper and reads it then his eyes widen in shock]

Father: It is your report card....[angerly] and you got a C! how do you explain this?

Daughter: I'm sorry! but I just havent been studying well since my boyfriend died in that plane crash.

Father: that is no excuse, and I regret to inform you that your behavior has earned you a [camera zooms in and dramatic music plays in the back ground... "bum bum bah!"] a spanking!

Daughter: [Gasps briging hand to mouth and taking a step backwards] but Father!

Father: I am sorry, but this is just the way it has to be. Now you run upstairs and wait for me!

[Daughter runs sobbing out of the room and the father sighs heavily]
[End scene one]


[scene two]
[Scene opens in the daughters lavishly decorated bedroom, with a pink silk canopy bed and plush rugs and such decor decorating this rich bedroom the Daughter siting in a straight back chair placed in the center of the room she is chewing on a finger nail nervously as she awaits her fathers entrance]

[Father enters the room his suit jacket has been removed and he motions for her to stand as he takes a seat in the chair]

Father: sorry about the wait, but I had to call an ambulance as the maid has just stabbed our butler... anyway come over and remove your skirt and panties for your punishment will be on [dramatic music] the bare

Daughter: oh! but father I am much too old for that! please not on the bare!

Father: now, now, we both know you have earned this spanking and I do not intend to make this easy on you, now, Daughter, do as you were told then lay across my knee.

Daughter: [slowly removes her skirt and panties and drapes herself accross her fathers knee] please not too hard

Father: [beginning to spank with his hand] no Daughter this will be hard, I do not want you to end up homeless and on the streets like your older sister!

[Father proceeds to give her 20+ smacks on her bottom as she bawls over his knee kicking hard, then when her bottom is a even glowing light pink he lets her up to her relief]

Father: now, fetch me your hairbrush!

Daughter: [crestfallen] but thats more than I can bear!

[Father give his daughter a look that says "dont mess with me" and she quickly gets the brush and returns to him]

Father:[taking the brush and pulling his reluctant daughter back over his knee] I [smack] hope [smack] you [smack] will [smack] study [smack] harder [smack] in [smack] the [smack] future! [loud smack. the daughter is crying out with each smack then he lets her up] Now you will stand in that corner for 10 minutes with your bottom bare and your hands on your head [she rushes to obey], I have to go now and pick your brother up from rehab.

[Father exits the room swiftly as the camera moves to the sobbing daughter with tear stained cheeks her hands on her head and a bottom that is deep crimson]
[End]


22 comments:

Paul said...

Mandy, chuckle, good effort, how old did you say you were??? *SMILES*
Warm hugs,
Paul.

Anonymous said...

Wow all the drama of every soap opera out there. Plus a bit of spanking. You go girl.

Mandy said...

hehe, I am 22, but I am going to be 23 in march! and I can be immature if I wanna! pbbbt! :P

Thomas_III said...

It's well-written, but I dislike the part about her being 16. Underaged spanking leaves a bad taste in my mouth. I suppose that you could pass it off as ageplay, though.

Mandy said...

eh, its a script :P

Thomas_III said...

So? It's still underaged.

Alli Kay said...

HAHAHAHAHAHA! I LOVE it! It's the part I was born to play!

Anonymous said...

@thomas it's short man. get over the girl being 16.

Thomas_III said...

Then I'll say no more.

Will said...

I know what you were thinkin'!

Naughty, Mandy...(wink*)

spank*'s aplenty.

~x~Will

Robin said...

omg Mandy.. I love it!! Gave me a chuckle!
You naughty girl you! /hugs

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